Wednesday, 23 November 2016

Athletics reflection

  • Athletics Reflection:

            What was the most enjoyable part of athletics for you? Why?

            Sausages because they were yum

            What are you really proud of? Why? 

            Kea winning the relay because we have not won it in years

            What was the most challenging part? Why?

            High jump  because I am not that good at it

            Where to now? What are your goals for next time? Why do you want to focus on this?

            Coming second in the 800 m

Sunday, 13 November 2016

Book buddy's

In the mornings do book buddys.
Book buddys is when you read with a buddy you read the same book and you have chats about me and my buddys are on our 4th book the would be a lot but we have been reading small books like Chaptin under pants and dirty birty


Description: On Mondays and Friday's we have been doing PrEP. PrEP is our preparation for market day. we made rubber band guns that shoot loom bands. It was on last Friday and our guns sold out within 10 minutes. For us it was a mighty sucsess because we thought that the stuff we made wasn't going to sell.

Thursday, 22 September 2016

Head phones

For the last 2-3 weeks we have been trying to write persuasively to sell our made up head phones.

Come in and buy my Dodo Bluetooth headphones they can connect to any device without any cords getting tangled and they can play music without any wifi and they come with built in hard drive with the top 500 songs that update weekly or connect to Spotify to choose your own style of music.
They are good for all those all blacks and soccer players to wear while doing their warm up and are made out of carbon fibre for maximum strength and durability. They come in all different sizes and are that waterproof that divers can wear them while they are diving under water.
They have strong hinges so that you can fold them down and you can fit them in a pocket.
Dodo headphones also come with a bag that has a speaker built into it so that you can share the love of music with all my he people around you.

Sunday, 18 September 2016

Kapa Haka

Despoin: last wensday we had a show (celebration of performing arts)with all the schools on the northern side of the palmaston north I am in the band we played hall of fame but with a twist because we did it with kapa Haka so we changed some of the words.
I think we did well but the band had a bit of trouble with the transition on to the stage and after the Haka the microphones dropped out.
Day Performance

Live at the regent

What are you most proud of and why?
The Last song with the band
 What challenged you the most and why?
The transition because I had to give the microphone to the singers
What do you need to work on next time and why?
The transition because we didn't practice going on and off the stage at all

feedback: I like how you asked the reader questions - mike
Feedforward I think you could be a little discriptiver - mike

Evaluation:I think I could of transition alot better s

Wednesday, 14 September 2016

Art portfolio sample

Descpeion: this tearm for art we did making marks that is we you are trying to make your background mean something to you and tell a story about you and tjen in the middle we had a self portrait

Sunday, 4 September 2016

maths portfolio sample

Descpeion: for maths this tearm we had a rich task at the start of the tearm and then We had jeeps of workshops that helped us work on all the things we needed to complete the rich task and then we did the rich task again at the end to see how we had unproved

Tuesday, 23 August 2016

book buddy's portfolio sample

Description:for reading this tearm we did book buddy's. buddy's are your reading buddy and you can talk to them about your book and you have a slide this is my book buddy slide me and my book buddy didn't like our first book so we talk to our coach about it and he said that we could change our coach is Nic we got to pick one of the teachers to be our coach .

Monday, 22 August 2016

Writing portfolio sample

Description: this tearm we watched a video on how tennis balls are made and put done some ideas that we got from watching the video and then crossed out all off the things that had anything to do with tennis or tennis balls. 

 here is the Link to the video that we watched:

This is my writing: 

Feedback and Feedfordwards : I think that your story is very creative, I liked how his pants started to rip. maybe next time you could read your story to see if it makes sense because I discovered some mistakes. -Hannah P

I think I have done well but it took a long time and I mucked around a bit and my story is not that long.

Thursday, 11 August 2016

Excellence portfolio sample

Desciption: this tearm our value is to show panekiretanga (excellence) in every thing we do so we made this slide / post to show how w heave been showing panekiretanga (excellence) in a he play ground and in the classroom out of school too.

Sunday, 31 July 2016

Discovery time week two

Discovery time 
Today I made a working cross bow that shot pens from it 
I learnt that the longer the rubber the shorter it shoots and for discovery time next week I am going to my guns from wood 

Thursday, 28 July 2016

Maths 29/7/2016

Description: today I got 5 things the all together added up to 5g.

Wednesday, 6 July 2016


For maths we had this question to day it was easy for me the answers are 9 and 23.

Slct2 reflection

1) How do you think you did on your SLC? What was the highlight?
It was fun and I liked sharing my learning 
2) What did you do differently to make your SLC stand out?
We got to pick what we shared 
3) How will you make your Home Led Conference in Term 3 be awesome? What things might you do to make it awesome?
Get BK

Wednesday, 29 June 2016


Description: for maths with James we had to do this fractions checkpoint as a test I got 11 right that is really good some people only got 2 or 3.but we were aloud to go back and and do the ones we missed but I didn't know.

Feedfoward and feedback:I think you did well in the maths but you could of gone back and checked it

Evaluation: I think I should gone but and do the ones I missed.

Sunday, 26 June 2016

Kapa Haka portfolio sample

Description: for the last three weeks I have been playing the guitar for our kapa hake
 we have our Pae Tamariki tomorrow but I can't play the cords fluently and off by heart so all of he other are just going.

Feedfordwards and feedback:

evaluation :
What is the hardest part about Kapa Haka and why? 
Knowing the cord and keeping up
What are you most looking forward to about Pae Tamariki next week and why?
I am not going but it f I was it would be being up on the stage 
Why do you think others should join Kapa Haka?
Because it is fun and hard 

Monday, 6 June 2016

Cross country portfolio sample

Last week we had our cross country and I came 2nd = then I went to interschool cross country  top 5 went from each year group there was 29 school there so the was over 100 in each race I came 51 and our best runner came 2 in our race it was about 3.5 km and very muddy.
Feedforward/feedback:I think you gave the info and I like how you did what pepole came

Evaluation:I think I did well and I bet my last years place by 18 places and I think my description is good.

Sunday, 29 May 2016

Test portfolio sample

Last week we did a test I got a lower % than last time I don't really know why but I think it is because I talk to muck in maths time and don't get a lot of work done.
So I am going to try and work by myself and not stuff  around with my friends.

This is the one that I did last week :
And this is the one I did last time:
Feedback/feedfoward: I think you did a good job on last times because you almost got over 80%, maybe this time you could try harder and practise so you can get over 80% and go on the test. -Zara

Evaluation: I think I did bad this time but I did good last time



For the last 5 week we have been learning Japanese with one of our teachers.
We have learnt to count to twenty and right our names and to translate Japanese to there sound.
Here is my name: ハンター
Tomorrow we are going to IPU.

Feedfordwards and feedback: I think you did well with telling what we did but mabey a little bit more about all of the things we have been doing-hunter

Evaluation:I think I have done well at learning Japanese and I have enjoyed it and I have learnt a lot.

Thursday, 19 May 2016

Science portfolio sample 2016

Every Friday for the past three weeks Troy's whanu class does inquiry about weather. On the first week our class split up into two different groups to make a barometer. If it's high that means it's gonna be hot if it is low that means it's gonna be more cold. Everyone in our class made a weather,inquiry slide. Every day you take a photo of the sky in our slide we write if the barometer high or low. Also we had to write what clouds we thought was outside. We failed but this is the image of what it should look like.

Feedback and feedfordwards:next time you could get a video and put it on here but I liked it

evaluation i think i did good but i was not reay to do it

Monday, 16 May 2016


I have been writing metaphors 


For handwriting today i did to poems in 5 minutes all I have to work on is speed so I did well

Monday, 9 May 2016

Buddy time

For buddy time today we had to teach our little buddy's Japanese but my little buddy already knew more then me.

Reading 1

 The moon has a hot side and a cold side and a dark side and a light side.
the first people in 1946 to go on the moon wanted to go back.
then in 2006 they went on SMART 1 but they crashed it.


On Monday we did a handwriting test I did 👌🏽

Sunday, 8 May 2016

Spelling test

Description:on Monday and Tuesday we did a 300 word test I did better on the first half 


Monday, 2 May 2016

Graffiti art

Description :on the last day of school we did some Graffiti art this is my one.

 Evaluation: I think that I rushed it a lot and it looks like a terrible.

Wednesday, 30 March 2016

Camp portfolio sample writing

In writing we have been writing about camp I was writing to entertain so I made it funny.
First we had to make our 1 draft then we looked back over it to make it better 

This is my writing:


The sniper his name is Eli.
Silent still and deadly one shot kills he fires everything around his dead straight away.
Now the story

We were trying to sleep there was 7 of us in our cabin.But then bang one man down bang bang bang bang it was only me and Eli then I released Eli was the sniper I ran but bang I was DOWN.....

The archer still and silent but so deadly his name was Max Max Hannan ...........

We were doing an activity then i see this little movement out the corner of my eye.
But I spin around because my mate had just been shot in the chest with an arrow I turn back around then I see him noooo I scream an arrow was gliding at me I was hit it went straight through me.

Feedback & feedfordwards: you did really good at using great words but
you could of done better by describing the people in the story. #Fletcher

Evolution:I think i did well but it could be longer and I agree with fletcher.

Wednesday, 23 March 2016

TE REO portfolio post

Description: in TE REO we have been looking at family trees this is my mums side of the family my dads is alot bigger. We learnt how to pronounce the Maori words for our family members.


Feedfordwards and feedback: i like how you can go back and know many time you could find out the names of some . Max h

Evaluation:I think I should of added my dads family to.

Sunday, 20 March 2016

Camp portfolio sample

Description:this week we went to camp it was so fun we did ten activities there was a water slide and we got to ride horses they were rite outside our cabin we could here them eating and farting. 
The cabin were good I had my best friend and my cousin in my cabin so that was good 

Feedback & Feedfordwards: it was good and you described nicely 
But next time you could put some more pictures. -Louis

Thursday, 3 March 2016

Camp Goals

Next week we are going on camp. Here are my goals.

Monday, 29 February 2016

Buddy time

Descpein: for buddy time we looked at how we were alike and we made something to show it
We made this poster.i choose Harry because he is cool and he is nice.

Thursday, 25 February 2016


In class we have making a movie about listening it hade to be 30sc and 3p groups the group hade to have a y5 y6 and a mix of girls and boys.


Big idea: we have leant that the best listening is active listening active listening I when you are making eye contact with them and body language or agreeing with them and asking questions.
And there is. Bad listening like me to or busy listening me to listening is when you but in and talk about how you did something alike and busy listening is when you are doing something different and not listening.

Feedback and feedfordwards:your video is good but you need to speak a little bit louder other than that it is really good -Atlanta 

I think that pur group did good but we should have been more excited about it 

Wednesday, 17 February 2016


Description: For the last week we have been working towards making a Waitangi Day video / poster treaty / myn is the treaty everyone worked hard to make their. 

Big idea: for my activity I made a treaty with Eli we decided to make a vote for the top five questions out of seven. Then we put them all in to our treaty. 
We learnt that the British came over to new zeland to get more land but they made bad deals and the treaty was translated badly.

Feedback: I think the treaty is a very cleaver idea to do and I think it's turned out really good. Next you could of added more rules. 

Evaluation: I think I did well in writing out the treaty and me and Eli worked well together.
I think we were multi because we had more then three ideas 

Wednesday, 3 February 2016

ɱყ ơŋɛ ῳơཞɖ

My word is Opatuaity
I wanted opatuaity to be my word 
Never miss an opatuaity

One word is a word that mean something to you ( goal ) 
Our teachers in poutuma told us about it.
We made some art to show our one word 

Feedfordwards feedback:I really like how you did a spider but I can't really read it.


Open question

Descpion:we have been learning about the treaty
Waitangi Day commemorates a very historic and important event that took place in New Zealand 176 years ago on Saturday.
At Waitangi, in the Bay of Islands, a treaty was signed on February 6th 1840 between 46 local Māori chiefs and Captain William Hobson, who represented Queen Victoria and the British Government.
This treaty was written in English and then translated into Māori by a Missionary named Henry Williams and his son named Edward.

My question

Why did The British what the land

Who were the people that were there (the people buying the land)
Who were the people that he passed