Description: in my writing we are looking at complex sentence's we did some writing and put complex sentence and then we highlighted all of them.
Big idea: for writing my goal was comp in comp we have be learning about complex sentence if you don't now what complex sentence's are it is a simple sentence and another simple sentence that can not stand by it self.
Hunter, this story is rather brief and lacks the 'punch' that I know you are capable of adding to your story that you showed us last year. You surround yourself with well crafted and planned literature in the Cherub series, so why not try to use some of those skills in your own writing?
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