Tuesday, 23 August 2016

book buddy's portfolio sample

Description:for reading this tearm we did book buddy's. buddy's are your reading buddy and you can talk to them about your book and you have a slide this is my book buddy slide me and my book buddy didn't like our first book so we talk to our coach about it and he said that we could change our coach is Nic we got to pick one of the teachers to be our coach .

Monday, 22 August 2016

Writing portfolio sample

Description: this tearm we watched a video on how tennis balls are made and put done some ideas that we got from watching the video and then crossed out all off the things that had anything to do with tennis or tennis balls. 

 here is the Link to the video that we watched:

This is my writing: 

Feedback and Feedfordwards : I think that your story is very creative, I liked how his pants started to rip. maybe next time you could read your story to see if it makes sense because I discovered some mistakes. -Hannah P

I think I have done well but it took a long time and I mucked around a bit and my story is not that long.

Thursday, 11 August 2016

Excellence portfolio sample

Desciption: this tearm our value is to show panekiretanga (excellence) in every thing we do so we made this slide / post to show how w heave been showing panekiretanga (excellence) in a he play ground and in the classroom out of school too.